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teaotter ([personal profile] teaotter) wrote on June 2nd, 2013 at 05:51 pm
This is gorgeously written. I love the pacing, and the way the scenes shift back and forth between the present and the past. I love the way you've built an image of June, here, and the difference between what she shows and how she feels and *why*. This hurts, but it feels exactly right.
 
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